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Emerald Moon
By Amy

People have heard of fantasy before. Fantasy is imagination combined with human experiences and beliefs. And sometimes in this world, a fantasy can become a reality, but what would happen if a reality becomes a fantasy…?

Chapter One: Modern Fairy Tale
The wind brushed through my hair and I smelled the fresh, clean air. I closed my eyes and started dreaming again. This morning was just like any other, where I would be walking to school on this quiet street. Sometimes, I just don’t want to do anything but think. Think about how my life could be different from the way it is now, like maybe an alternate reality, or maybe a fantasy. My friends often tell me that I’m too much of a dreamer. “What’s wrong with dreaming?” I would always ask myself. Sure, most of the time my mind’s somewhere else besides reality, but what’s wrong with that? You don’t have to be a kid to read fairy tales, right?
“Anna! Wait up!” I heard Shelby’s voice call from a distance. Now broken out of my daydream, I turned around and greeted her. With her short, dark hair whisking through the breeze, Shelby smiled widely and asked “Hey, Anna. Have you read Emerald Moon yet?” After hearing the words ‘Emerald’ and ‘Moon’ my mind flickered.
“No, I haven’t! I heard that it was really, really good! I’m saving up my money to buy a copy. I want to read it so badly…”
“Oh, really? It is a great book! Here, you can borrow my copy.” Shelby dug into her bag and pulled out a thick hard cover book.
“S-seriously? Are you sure?” I was already reaching out for the book.
“Yeah of course! Anyways, my friend, Kevin is going to take me to go see the movie this weekend.”
As I clutched the book, I was humming to myself happily. For I have just received the fairy tale that I, a fantasy fan, was looking forward to reading ever since it was published. “Thank you, Shelby! You’re my best friend!” I cried.
“Ha, ha. Well that’s nice to know, but it’s no big deal. Keep it in tell you’re done with it.” I grinned. I’m lucky to have such a generous friend like Shelby.
I arrived at school and went straight to my classroom, eager to read the book. I quickly took a seat in my desk and pulled it out. I flipped through to see how big the text was printed. It surprised me that it was printed fairly large. The book was thick, but the story was short. Then as I turned some more pages, something baffled me even more. There were colorful, vivid illustrations in some parts of the book. This story must’ve really of been written for kids, but I could care less. Being a middle school student doesn’t mean that I’m too old to read this kind of stuff. I examined one of the pictures closely. A round, yellow creature with long arms twice its size was what I saw. “Mr. Toko…” I read the label quietly out loud. It looked strange, but I thought that it was cute. I glanced up and saw Mr. Hobart entering the classroom. I quickly slipped the book back into my bag, fearing that he would confiscated it if seen…
As Mr. Hobart was going through the daily math lesson, I stared out at the window next to me, daydreaming once again. I observed the trees with their thin braches flowing in the wind. I saw some students playing soccer in the field for gym class. It was cloudy, so today the sun hid behind the clouds, making the world dimmer. Then all of a sudden, something flew by. My eyes widened. A round, yellow creature with long arms was staring at me behind the glass. It smiled and waved at me. I stared for a bit. Blinked a couple of times. It was still there, smiling. “Oh… oh my god!!” I screamed.
“A-Anna! What’s wrong?!” stuttered Mr. Hobart.
I flew out of my desk and whisked my arm at the window. “Th-there’s a flying egg!! What’s his name?! Mr. To…ki…?” I turned at the window. Nothing was there. I could feel my face warming up. Then I looked at Mr. Hobart with his hands on his hips. “Um, wait… I, uh…” What was I supposed to say in that situation?
I could hear giggles and laughing around me as I walked home. I just made a total idiot of myself. Well, people were already making fun of me before that, but I still felt so embarrassed. I must’ve been hallucinating or something. There’s no way that this ‘Mr. Toko’ character could be real…
I plopped onto my bed when I got home. I stared up at the ceiling. I wanted to forget everything that happened today and just daydream. I closed my eyes. It’s not that I’m unhappy with my life right now. I just don’t know what to do with myself.
I heard something tap against my window. My eyes flipped open and I jumped up. I turned to the window and brushed the blue curtain aside. My eyes widened. Floating there was the yellow creature, Mr. Toko. I frantically hustled around my room, looking for my cell phone. “Where is it?!” I dug through the clothes lying on my floor. I felt something hard in one of the pant pockets. “Found it!” I quickly set the phone into camera mode and aimed at the window. With my trembling hands, I clicked the shutter button. In an instant, he disappeared into then air. I checked the results of my photo. The image came out all blurry due to the shaking of my hands. I paused for a bit and peeked out my window. I didn’t see anything… was I hallucinating again? Have I gone nuts? I started to regret borrowing this Emerald Moon book from Shelby. I think it’s driving me insane.
I still felt like something wasn’t right. I checked the window again to make sure that there weren’t anymore crazy egg-shaped devils. Fortunately, I didn’t see any. I just saw tress, people, and houses. That’s how it’s supposed to be. I took a deep breath and prayed that I wouldn’t see anymore wacky hallucinations. But I should’ve known better. For I have always had bad luck; my prayers were never answered. I looked over to my left and saw the bizarre creature once again.
“Out! Get out! Get out!!” I screamed and threw a pillow at him. He swiftly dodged my cushion and smiled brightly. Before I could even think, he briskly floated over and licked my face. I gave out a bloody screamed and punched him. The egg-shaped creature gently patted his head and grinned, not seeming to mind my anger and confusion.
“I’m Mr. Toko! It’s nice to meet you, Princess.” His appearance was adorable, but he was terrifying. He was in my room, he was talking to me, … and he was real.
“Now if you don’t mind, I will now be kidnapping you.”
I panicked. “H-hey! Wait!! But I do mind!”
“Hmm, then that’s too bad.” His long arm stroked the ground and little ripples came into the floor. My feet then started to sink into the ground. It was almost like quicksand.
“You stupid egg!! Let me go!”
“Sorry, but no can do.”
My head sunk under the floor and a clear open area surrounded me. Still panicking, I looked around the forlorn area. I noticed that I was floating, but then I started to drop downwards slowly. Suddenly, I wasn’t floating anymore and I was falling, plunging down into the empty dimension…
I wasn’t sure of how long I was falling, but my surroundings were changing. I started to see walls, like the inside a house. I was knocked out of my musing state when I unexpectedly fell straight into a sofa. I promptly sat up and my eyes flew all over. I was in a room, a very cluttered room that is. There was an old wooden table kneeling beside me, and a couple of glasses filled with what looked like beverages; one drink was tipped over and staining the carpet. There were random miscellaneous items everywhere. And to think my mother told me that my room was messy. Mr. Toko, who was floating above, gave a sigh.
“Aww, Victor’s not here yet. Oh well, looks like we’re just going to have to wait for him. Hey, I know! Let’s play a rhyming game!”
I tilted my head up. “No! Where am I? What is this place? Take me back home!!”
Completely ignoring my rant, he said, “I’ll start! Let’s see… okay! Sock!”
“I’m not playing your stupid game! Take me back!”
“Hurry up! Your time’s running out!” He snapped back “5…4…3…”
“What? I’m being timed? You never told me that!”
“2…1…”
I finally gave in. “Block!!”

Chapter One End
:iconpacthesis:
Oh dear... it's long... really long. :disbelief: Please feel free to NOT to read this if you don't feel like it. I, myself don't even want to review it.
I do not plan on typing up the rest of these chapters. I did this for a weird English contest which somehow made it into the finals. :dizzy: This story was based off of my 4th manga, Emerald Moon. (Which I'm currently re-doing...)

The limit for my entry was 1500 words, so I was cut kinda short... This is the "novel" version. It's a little bit different from the manga. The characters also have funny English names too in this version. ^^;

EDIT:
Haha, oh yay... I tied for 3rd place with this story. I'm proud of myself... kinda.

Japanese to English names~!
Arina = Anna
Seina = Shelby (Doesn't make apperance in manga)
Koru = Kevin (Doesn't make apperance in manga)
Hayashi sensei = Mr. Hobart
Mr. Toko = Mr. Toko (Only one who kept their name...)
Veon = Victor (Didn't really get to come into this chapter because of the word limit...)

(Eri and Yuji did not make an apperance in the novel and the oringinal version. They are new characters for the rebuild of the manga, heh.)
Sample of the new manga version here: [link]
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:iconchloelyn:
Mood: Annoyed ~ChloeLyn Apr 16, 2013  New member Hobbyist Artist
STOP WITH THE CHAIN MAIL gahhhhd if that was real id be dead by now plus ur prob scaring younger children u jerk NO LLAMA FOR U but u can have this :stfu:
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:iconravette13:
this
is
not
a
joke!
carry
on
reading!
or
you
will
die,
even
if
you
only
looked
at
the
word
warning!


ONCE
THERE
WAS
A
LITTLE
GIRL
CALLED
CLARISSA,
SHE
WAS
10
YEARS
OLD
AND
SHE
LIVED
IN
A
MENTAL
HOSPITAL,
BEACUSE
SHE
KILLED
HER
MUM
AND
DAD.








SHE
GOT
SO
BAD
SHE
STARTED
TO
KILL
ALL
THE
STAFF
IN
THE
HOSPITAL
SO
THE
GOVERMENT
DECIDED
THAT
THE
BEST
IDEA
WAS
TO
GET
RID
OF
HER
SO
THEY
SET
UP
A
SPECIAL
ROOM
TO
KILL
HER,
AS
HUMANE
AS
POSSIBLE
BUT
IT
WENT
RONG
THE
MACHINE
THEY
WERE
USEING
WENT
WRONG.








AND
SHE
WAS
SAT
THERE
IN
AGONY
FOR
HOURS
UNTILL
SHE
FINALLY
DIED.








NOW
EVERY
WEEK
ON
THE
DAY
OF
HER
DEATH
SHE
RETURNS
TO THE
PERSON
THAT
READS
THIS
LETTER,
ON
A
MONDAY
NIGHT
AT
12:00
SHE
KREEPS
INTO
YOUR
ROOM
AND
KILLS
YOU,
BUT
SLOWLY
AND
PAINFULLY
SLOWLY
CUTTING
DIFFRENT
PARTS
OF
UR
BODY
THEN
WATCHES
YOU
BLEED
TO
DEATH
IF
YOU
DONT
SEND
THIS
TO
20
PEOPLE
BY
MIDNIGHT
SHELL
BE
COMEING
TO KILL
YOU!
SEND
IT
SO
SHE
HAS
ANOTHER
LOAD
OF
PEOPLE
TO
GET
AND
FORGETS
ABOUT
YOU
DONT
BELVE ME
HEY?

EXAMPLE
1:
JENNY
DIDNT BELIVE THIS AND DELETED IT WITHOUT EVEN READING THE WHOLE THING! A FEW DAYS LATER ON THE MONDAY NIGHT SHE WAS WOKEN UP BYE LOUDE FOOTSTEPS AND HEAVY BREETHING THERE WAS CLARISSA STANDING THERE WITH A HUGE KNIFE AND WELL JENNY IS HISTORY NOW.









EXAMPLE
2:
TOM
ONLY SENT IT TO 5 PEOPLE CUZ HE THOUGHT HED BE SAFE AND IT WAS PROBLY JUST A JOKE BUT OH HOW RONG WAS HE! HE DIED THE NEXT NIGHT ON MONDAY AND ILL TELL YA NOW IT WASNT PRETTY(JUST CUZ HE SENT FIVE HE DIDNT COMPLETE THE TASK)

EXAMPLE
3:
JOEANNA
SENT IT TO 19 PEOPLE SHE THOUGHT IT WAS CLOSE ENOUGH AND WOULD DO BUT SHE WAS WRONG SHE DIED THAT NIGHT ON A MONDAY AND ONCE AGAIN IT WASNT
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~worldpeaceismine Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Can u try to finish the edited version of 'Emerald Moon'? I'm stuck in horrifying suspension... ...
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:iconlight123moon:
um Amy-chan can you make a vampire diaries dating sim?
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:iconakirafairytail:
Nice..!!! I like stories especially fantasy type story!!(>.<)
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:icontwilightjunkie99:
You should get an acount on FicionPress.com
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:iconsasoluver:
wow....this is really good...keep going......
uuuuuuuuuum....can I ask one question..........??????
how old are you right now???????????????
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*Pacthesis Apr 7, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
15.
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:icontired-al:
"I finally gave in. 'Block!!' " xDD

Can't wait to read the E.M. manga chap 1~

Aww, but that's good how you can use your stories for other stuff like schoolwork. I remember my buddie from my halo pc clan came up with the most ridiculous BS-story using the names of like 8 different members in our clan... and he talked about the currency being "zeny" from Ragnarok Online.. rofl..he got a 100% mark on it too xD
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